Monday, April 20, 2009

Drops of You

You rain on me.
I am forever wiping the drops of you from my face;
today I thought I might drown
as your drops became an ocean
suffocating me into submission,
so that I might float.


  1. This is a very dangerous text... Be careful Charli... It can ignite a wide range of emotions in your readers and putting off this type of fire isn't easy.

    "My desire is to create a refuge of simple pleasure, an oasis of tantalizing sexual tranquility."
    You've succeeded.

  2. I am glad that I have succeeded and am not too concerned about having to put out