He says........Come to me as a child
with pureness of vision and heart
Come to me as a princess
knowing you are the part
Come to me with your demon;
I will tame it with my glove
Come to me with anger,
it will be subdued with violent love
Come to me with openness,
and strength enough to give
Come to me with honesty
and I will show you how to live.
*sigh* such exquisite writing as always, Charli!
ReplyDeletei liked this a lot, it has a nice rhythm, and i particularly like "Come to me with anger,it will be subdued with violent love ". very nice line.
ReplyDeletei also liked the "benevolent Dominant" tone of the poem.
Thank you cutesy pah, it is so nice to get feedback on what I pen here.
ReplyDeleteThanks Finbar....I love the sound of "violent love" as well.....sometimes words come together and sound so bloody beautiful side by side; it is so very exciting when it "happens"....smile.